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Just a teen who fails and succeeds.
Tries again and smiles more.
Hugs longer and cries deeper.
Misses people and forgets, never.
Lives for God and dies to Satan.
Jumps for joy and pushes hatin'
Loving stronger and hoping further
Tripping, but not halting.
Love. It's What I Do.
Hope. It's What I Seek.
God. It's Who I'm For.
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~Ralooq:iconRalooq: Jun 13, 2008, 10:55:54 PM
pretty:love:

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=DandiBooks315:iconDandiBooks315: Jun 14, 2008, 7:54:54 AM
Thank you! (&& for fave!)

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It's better to be an authentic loser than a false success, and to die alive than to live dead.
=sametimenxtyr:iconsametimenxtyr: Jul 6, 2008, 6:07:09 AM
:clap: nicely done, Andi!!!! :hug:

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When I count my blessings, I count you twice!!
=DandiBooks315:iconDandiBooks315: Jul 6, 2008, 11:13:11 AM
thank you Koni!

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It's better to be an authentic loser than a false success, and to die alive than to live dead.
=DandiBooks315:iconDandiBooks315: Jul 6, 2008, 11:13:34 AM
Thank you!!

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It's better to be an authentic loser than a false success, and to die alive than to live dead.
=sametimenxtyr:iconsametimenxtyr: Jul 6, 2008, 1:37:57 PM
:hug:

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When I count my blessings, I count you twice!!
Mood: Cheerful !man-cool:iconman-cool: Jul 12, 2008, 3:20:17 PM
That's a very cool and deep writting about Christian trials!!!! A really good job and I really love it!!! Great work!!! :)

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=catz1313:iconcatz1313: Jul 12, 2008, 3:27:14 PM
Im not one for poetry but this struck me deep.
This is lovely and inspirational to me.
Cause it also describes me in a sence.
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~cat-nap:iconcat-nap: Jul 12, 2008, 4:23:41 PM
This is really beautiful. : ) :heart:
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